Reincarnated as an Energy with a System - Chapter 1797: Feedback
Chapter 1797: Feedback
Ning was a nobody once again.
He toured the countryside of the Golden Empire with no responsibility or duty. He took his time going through the places, helping where he could, leaving when he was done.
He went from city to city, watching people still rebuilding their towns and cities.
Then, he left the Golden Empire.
He visited Marsh first, going through the cities next to the border. The war had troubled them quite a bit as well. With the soldiers having stayed nearby, a lot of their resources had been stripped away for the sake of feeding the army.
Ning went through their people too, helping them where he could. He was a Spirit Detective, so he helped people get closure with their loved ones they had lost as well.
Many of the soldiers had died, so a lot of pain hid in these cities.
Ning continued going through the entirety of Marsh. He got into trouble a few times too. A few times, he would meet nobles that would recognize him from the final confrontation and try to capture him.
He managed to slip out each time.
One of those times, however, he ended up being captured and used up all of his powers. The next time he got his powers again, he gained a new one.
Ning could now see through things up to a certain distance, as if no obstacle stood before him. It wasn’t a helpful power in combat, but in regular life, it was quite advantageous.
After Marsh, Ning went to Olvia next, roaming their countryside. He helped people there too, gaining as many quests as he could, and fulfilling all of them.
He steadily got more and more quests, and thus got more and more points.
The more he got, the more he got accustomed to the system he had. He began seeing its flaws much more clearly.
After Olvia, Ning went to Lenes next, and after Lenes, he went to the duchy. He visited Grandma Usha and saw how she was doing.
The old woman had long since realized what had happened in the world and was beyond the point of being surprised when Ning told her what Shara had achieved.
Ning asked her if she wanted to go to where Shara was, but the old woman loved her little village and didn’t want to move. Ning accepted that.
He had a lot of points now, so he freely used some. At 32 points, he bought a few Scrolls of Servant Creation. Ning spent a day crafting three puppets made up of wood and metal, and then used the scroll on them.
The puppets came to life, which would now and forever be commanded by the old woman.
The woman didn’t understand how anything could come to life, and Ning didn’t bother explaining it to her. He stayed with her for a few weeks before leaving once again.
He headed west, going to the Golhlog kingdom, where he roamed the kingdom. He continued his adventure, spending a few months there before heading east.
He returned back to the duchy, going through the cities he had to rush to get away from when he first started. He took his time, visiting each place, helping anyone that needed his help.
He continued east, crossing almost all of the duchy before he had to stop. It was over. He was done.
< Congratulations, Host >
< You have successfully participated in the experiment >
< The Creator is delighted >
Ning felt his body begin to disintegrate.
“Am I going to lose this body?” he asked.
< You are done with the Experiment, so you have no need for that body >
Ning felt the slightest tinge of disappointment, but the body wasn’t that good to begin with, so his emotions regarding it disappeared quickly.
< Your current system will vanish >
Ning found his consciousness teleported suddenly. One moment, he was inside of a tavern room, still in the middle of his travels. And in the next moment, he was many meters deep in the uncharted mountains of Moliya.
Ning burst out of the ground, his original body coming back to him.
“Wow, I had forgotten how good this was,” Ning said. “But then, I had forgotten almost everything. That body did not have a good mind to remember things.”
< Please take a moment to provide feedback for the System you tested for the past 3 years >
“Feedback, sure.”
Ning began talking about every little thing he had planned for the past few months as he had come closer to being done with the experiment.
“Random quests are bad. Worse, we need to be able to choose whether we want one or not. It would be good to abandon quests halfway through. Maybe some sort of timer or urgency to the quest would be nice. The quests also need their own separate space to list. The shop definitely needs a lot more things to buy. The Energy System is much better in that regard.”
Ning continued explaining every good thing, bad thing, or even mediocre thing about the system, giving every bit of feedback he could. When he had nothing more left to say, he said one last thing.
“If the Creator is planning on making a different system, I would suggest that he doesn’t need to. The Energy System is already more than good enough.”
< Are you done? >
“Yes, I am done. That is all I have to say.”
< Thank you >
< The System will use up some Energy to send this feedback to the Creator >
< Feedback sent >
“Great,” Ning said. “I do believe there was some sort of reward if I managed to stay alive for all 3 years of the experiment. How long before I get it? Do you have to shut down again for a few years?”
< The System is already implemented with the new changes >
Ning paused. “Changes? What changes?”
< As a reward for completing the experiment provided by the Creator, the Energy System has been adapted with the following permanent skills >
< ’Soul Detection’ and ’Dead Soul Absorption’ >
