The Life of PRAISEWORTHY
Chapter 21: The Storm and the Cradle
Volume 2: The Life of PRAISEWORTHY
The steady drip of rainwater off the tin eaves of the secondary storage shed was the only sound echoing through the rear yard of Farooq Flour Mills.
It was 5:02 AM. A thick, icy fog rolled off the black water of the canal, clinging to the brickwork and obscuring the iron fence lines.
Hunza stood near the wooden loading platform, his heavy flashlight unlit in his hand. His wide shoulders were squared, his jaw set in a quiet, watchful rhythm. After four hours of monitoring the intake chutes and inspecting the lock latches, his mind had settled into a deep, peaceful clarity. Inside his front hoodie pocket, his clean wage of ₱700 rested alongside his stamped employment affidavit.
Suddenly, a dull, metallic thud resonated from the rear perimeter wall near the timber shed—followed by the wet scrape of heavy steel being dragged across gravel.
Hunza’s eyes narrowed instantly. He dropped into a low, balanced stance, moving without a sound across the mud.
Behind the timber shed, two men wearing dark canvas rain ponchos were hoisting three silver-painted steel drums through a cut section of the wire mesh fence. The drums reeked of harsh, volatile chemicals—unrefined municipal diesel and solvent. Beside the first drum, pinned beneath an iron stone, lay a folded ledger sheet marked with a forged intake stamp and Hunza’s copied supervisor initials.
"Quiet with the second one," one of the men grunted in a low rasp, his hands slick with oil. "The driver is bringing the municipal inspector's van to the corner in five minutes. Once these drums are resting against the shed wall, the boy is finished."
Hunza stepped out from the deep shadow of the brick pillar, his massive frame blocking the narrow passage between the shed and the wall.
"You're dropping untaxed fuel on private property," Hunza said, his voice dropping into a low, terrifying rumble that carried over the rain.
Both men jumped back, dropping the iron bar they used to hoist the drum. The lead smuggler—a scarred courier from across the Salt Cut—pulled a short iron spike from his belt.
"Back off, kid!" the driver hissed, stepping toward him with the spike raised. "We have orders. The city marshals are already idling down the block. You touch us, and you're fighting municipal law."
Hunza didn't flinch. He took one slow, heavy step forward, his bare, calloused hands held open at his sides.
"I do not fight municipal law," Hunza said calmly. "And I do not let dirty cargo cross this fence. Leave the drums where they are and walk away before Mr. Farooq arrives."
Before the smuggler could respond, heavy, frantic footsteps rattled the wet gravel near the front pedestrian gate.
A young boy from Calle Siete came bursting around the corner of the brick warehouse, his clothes soaked through, gasping for air as he clutched his side.
"Hunza! Hunza!" the boy screamed, his voice cracking with terror and urgency.
Hunza’s eyes snapped toward the boy, though his body remained firmly balanced between the two smugglers. "What happened?"
"It’s Ayesha!" the boy gasped, pointing back toward the district lanes. "Her labor started early! The midwife is taking her to the Calle Siete clinic right now! She’s asking for you... the clinic door is opening, Hunza, you have to come now!"
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The two smugglers exchanged a quick, malicious glance. The lead man sneered, taking advantage of the distraction to kick the first drum so it rolled against the timber wall, lodging itself near the intake vent.
"Go on then, 'praiseworthy' boy," the smuggler mocked, backing toward the cut wire fence. "Run home to your wife. Leave the fuel right there for the inspectors to find at five-thirty. Either way, you lose today."
Hunza stood in the freezing fog, the roar of his blood pounding in his ears.
Two blocks away, Ayesha was in the clinic, her hand reaching out for him in the middle of severe labor pains. And right in front of him lay three drums of planted contraband designed to ruin Mr. Farooq, void his legal affidavit, and send him to a detention center before sunrise.
Hunza looked down at his broad, calloused palms—the clean hands that had lifted Uncle Tomas's cart, swept Mr. Farooq's floor, and held Ayesha's hands at the ultrasound machine.
A slow, unshakeable resolve settled into his chest.
Hunza’s chest rose and fell in one long, deep breath. He did not look at the smuggler’s sneering face, nor did he look back toward the street. He looked down at the iron latches on his own forearms, feeling the steady strength built through years of lifting oak timber, cabbage crates, and three-ton flour bags.
"Stay behind me," Hunza told the young messenger from Calle Siete, his deep voice dead calm.
Before the lead smuggler could scramble backward through the cut fence, Hunza took two explosive strides forward. He didn't use a fist or a weapon. He lunged into the mud, his broad shoulder slamming directly into the chest of the scarred courier, driving him clean through the gap in the wire fence and dumping him into the dark alley ditch outside.
The second smuggler dropped his iron spike in terror, scrambling over the top of the fence, leaving his canvas cap behind in the mud.
"Lock the side gate behind me!" Hunza called back to the trembling young messenger.
Without losing a second, Hunza dropped to his knees in the wet gravel beside the first three-hundred-liter steel drum. The drum weighed over two hundred kilograms, saturated with volatile municipal fuel and grease. To a normal man, it was a stationary obstruction requiring a team or a forklift.
Hunza planted his broad feet deep into the soft earth, hooked his thick, calloused fingers under the cold iron lip of the drum, and drove upward with his legs.
The iron groaned. Hunza’s shoulders strained under his dark hoodie, his jaw clenching tightly as every muscle in his back locked like solid oak. With one massive, controlled heave, he hoisted the entire drum off the ground, carried it four paces to the outer concrete wall away from the timber shed, and set it down with a heavy, muffled thud.
In less than ninety seconds, he grabbed the second and third drums, rolling and lifting them across the yard until all three were cleared away from Farooq’s intake vents and hidden behind the dead-end wall outside the property line. He snatched the forged ledger sheet from beneath the iron stone, folded it tight, and shoved it deep into his pocket.
The yard was clean. The intake chute was clear. Mr. Farooq’s mill was safe.
Hunza slammed the heavy iron bolt of the rear pedestrian gate into place, turned the brass key, and threw the keyring to the young messenger who stood in awe by the warehouse door.
"Give these keys to Mr. Farooq the moment he steps through the front gate!" Hunza barked, his lungs burning with cold morning air. "Tell him the rear gate is bolted!"
Without waiting for an answer, Hunza turned and vaulted over the low perimeter fence into the narrow drainage alley.
The morning fog was thick, but Hunza knew every cobblestone, every broken timber stair, and every drainage ditch between the grain district and Calle Siete. He didn't look at the unmarked municipal inspector van that was just turning its headlights on near the overpass. He didn't care about the cold rain pelting his face.
His boots pounded against the slick pavement like thunder.
Thump-thump, thump-thump.
The rhythm in his chest matched the heartbeat he had heard through the clinic monitor weeks ago. He sprinted past the produce lanes, past the chapel square, and swept around the corner of Calle Siete, his dark hoodie flying behind him in the wind.
He reached the two-story concrete bungalow of the charity clinic just as a loud, piercing cry echoed through the open second-floor window—a sound that cut through the roar of the rain and the noise of the waking city.
Hunza slammed open the clinic's front door, his heavy boots echoing in the narrow corridor as he took the stairs three at a time.
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