Rewriting Targaryen History
Chapter 203: Root and Stem
We closed the roads before sunrise.
Harrenhal possessed more gates than some castles possessed rooms, but only three mattered for what Blue Bat and I intended. The western road towards Stone Hedge, the southern route leading towards the Blackwater Rush, and the narrower northern track used by farmers, charcoal burners, and travellers who preferred avoiding the larger toll roads were all occupied by Unsullied before most of Harrenhal had properly awakened. Nothing passed without being stopped, questioned, and searched.
The merchants complained first, as merchants usually did. By midmorning, wagons stretched along the western road while Unsullied checked names against records provided by the Frey garrison, inspected covered carts, counted horses, and questioned anyone whose explanation did not match his cargo.
Grain sellers complained that every hour cost them coin, drovers insisted that cattle did not understand royal investigations, and one travelling septon loudly informed an Unsullied sergeant that delaying a holy man was an offence against the Seven. The sergeant understood almost none of his Common Tongue and therefore remained admirably unmoved by the theological argument.
I watched the congestion from Harrenhal’s western wall with Oscar Tully beside me. The young Lord Paramount studied the line of wagons before saying, "Word of this will spread through half the Riverlands by nightfall. If the bandits have people watching the roads, they will know exactly what we are doing."
"That is what I want," I replied. "We cannot hide two thousand Unsullied inside Harrenhal, and I have no intention of wasting time pretending otherwise. They have spent months deciding where to strike and when to disappear. I would rather make movement difficult enough that they are forced to change whatever system has kept them safe."
Oscar rested both hands upon the stone parapet. "They may simply stop raiding and hide in the woods until you leave."
"If they do, then they must still eat, water their horses, replace worn shoes, and move supplies. Disappearing is much easier when no one is looking closely."
The bandits had been allowed too much confidence. They had attacked villages within a day’s ride of Harrenhal, murdered patrols, stolen royal grain, and blocked roads as though the Riverlands belonged to whichever armed man reached them first.
Every successful raid made the next one easier because fear did part of the work for them. Villagers learned not to resist, merchants learned to travel in larger groups, and local patrols learned that pursuing men into the trees might mean never returning.
That was precisely how temporary violence became something permanent. I had watched enough men discover that a sword and a grievance could become the beginning of an army. I had no intention of allowing another one to grow from the remains of the civil war.
Blue Bat joined us shortly afterwards. His interpreter remained below in the yard because there was no need for him while the two of us spoke directly. Blue Bat looked towards the distant tree line before addressing me in High Valyrian.
"The northern patrol found fresh tracks before noon. At least twenty horses crossed the road during the night and entered the woods east of the Gods Eye. The spacing suggests they were moving together rather than travelling separately, and whoever led them knew enough to avoid the larger paths."
"Do you think they knew the road closures were coming?"
"I think they knew soldiers were leaving Harrenhal. Whether that warning came from inside the castle or from scouts watching the gates is harder to say."
I translated the important part for Oscar, whose expression tightened immediately. "If someone inside Harrenhal warned them, I want the garrison searched," he said.
"Not yet. If there is an informer, I would rather leave him believing we have not noticed him. Searching the castle without evidence only teaches him to become more careful."
Oscar clearly disliked the answer, though he accepted the reasoning. Blue Bat continued in High Valyrian, explaining that three hundred Unsullied had followed the tracks in groups of one hundred, close enough to support one another if attacked. He had ordered them not to pursue deeply into woodland until scouts established the ground ahead.
"That is exactly what I want," I told him. "These men have already destroyed one patrol by drawing it into the trees. We will not give them another simply because they show us a few convenient tracks."
Blue Bat nodded. "I gave the same order. If they want us in the forest badly enough, they can wait until we decide the terms."
By midday, seven Unsullied patrols had departed Harrenhal. None contained fewer than eighty men, and the largest numbered two hundred. They moved through villages, abandoned mills, farm tracks, ruined towers, and sections of woodland where Oscar’s men had previously seen suspicious movement. The Tully cavalry remained between the patrols, carrying messages and scouting open country rather than chasing every rider who disappeared among the trees.
Oscar disliked keeping his men from the pursuit, but he understood why I insisted upon it. Mounted men saw retreat and wanted to follow. Twenty-three of his soldiers had already learned the cost of following too quickly into prepared ground.
The Unsullied moved differently. If tracks entered a forest, they did not immediately disappear after them. Scouts went first while the main formation remained intact. If a village appeared deserted, it was surrounded before men entered. Barns, wells, cellars, and abandoned houses were searched methodically rather than dramatically.
By evening, they had detained eleven men. Nine were released after their stories proved ordinary. One possessed three horses carrying different brands and could provide no convincing explanation for any of them. The last carried the sword of a Tully patrolman who had vanished twelve days earlier.
We questioned him inside Harrenhal. He called himself Pate and claimed he had found the sword lying beside the road. Oscar placed the weapon upon the table between them and regarded him for several moments before speaking.
"One of my patrols disappeared twelve days ago, and this sword belonged to a man serving beneath my banner. You expect me to believe that you happened across it in the mud without seeing the body from which it came?"
Pate shrugged. "Dead men lose things."
Oscar’s expression hardened. "Then you must have known he was dead. If you never saw the body, explain how you reached that conclusion."
The silence that followed lasted only a moment, but it was enough. I studied Pate more carefully. He was perhaps thirty, with the shoulders of a former soldier and the posture of a man accustomed to waiting while someone of higher rank spoke. His clothing was poor, but his boots were military issue and in better condition than anything else he wore.
"Which army did you serve?" I asked.
His eyes shifted towards me. "I never served in one."
"You stand like a soldier, your boots came from an army store, and the callus across your hand belongs to someone who carried a spear for longer than a few months. If you intend to lie, at least choose one that does not require me to ignore what is in front of me."
He hesitated before admitting that he had served in a western host for part of the war.
"And afterwards?" I asked.
"I went home."
"Where was home?"
He refused to answer. Oscar leaned forward slightly. "Possessing the sword of one of my missing men gives me considerable reason to believe you know what happened to him. If you did not kill him yourself, then the best thing you can do is tell us who did."
Pate looked towards the door before answering, and the movement told me more than his words had. He was frightened, but not of us.
Blue Bat noticed it as well. He spoke quietly in High Valyrian, saying, "He believes the men outside these walls are more dangerous to him than we are. That is useful if we give him time to consider who can actually reach him."
I answered in the same tongue. "Provided fear of them does not outweigh reason."
Oscar glanced towards Blue Bat’s interpreter, who repeated the exchange for him. I turned back to Pate. "How many men are there?"
"Enough."
"That is not a number."
Pate’s expression changed slightly. "You think they are frightened because you closed a few roads? They have fought men better than your black soldiers for years."
The interpreter repeated the insult for Blue Bat. His face remained expressionless. I almost admired Pate’s ability to continue making poor decisions.
"The men standing in this castle held the centre at Honeyholt while dragons fought above them," I said. "You are entitled to dislike the Unsullied, but if your survival depends upon believing that woodland raiders are better soldiers, then you have chosen an unfortunate source of comfort. You can tell us what you know now, or you can spend several days deciding whether the people you fear are worth protecting."
We placed him in a separate cell and allowed him to think. The second day produced the first blood.
An Unsullied patrol moving south-west discovered a farmhouse that had supposedly been abandoned weeks earlier. The building itself was empty, but scouts found fresh horse dung beneath a grove nearby. Rather than enter the trees, the patrol withdrew in a manner deliberately careless enough to look uncertain.
The bandits took the invitation.
Twenty-seven men emerged after sunset and attempted to strike the rear of the column, apparently expecting frightened levies who would scatter once arrows began falling from the trees. Instead they found one hundred Unsullied waiting in formation, with another group already moving behind them.
Six bandits died during the first exchange. Eleven surrendered once they realised the retreat had been deliberate, while the remainder escaped into darkness. One Unsullied died when an arrow entered his throat.
Blue Bat reported to me after midnight. Oscar and the Frey castellan attended, which meant his interpreter stood beside him while Blue Bat spoke in High Valyrian.
"They expected the patrol to panic," Blue Bat explained. "Their attack was confident because this method has worked before. They did not prepare for men who continued holding formation while arrows struck them."
"Did the prisoners tell you anything useful?"
"Not yet. Two carry western coin, and one possesses a Bracken clasp with the crest filed away. That may matter, or it may simply mean he once served someone who did."
Oscar reacted as soon as the interpreter translated the answer. "If Bracken men are involved, then this may be more than banditry. Stone Hedge was taken from their ruling line and given to me."
"One clasp does not prove that House Bracken organised anything," I said. "Their lands changed hands after the war, which means servants, retainers, soldiers, cousins, and dependants all lost positions at the same time. Any of them might carry old belongings without taking orders from the former lords."
Oscar accepted the correction, although he remained visibly uneasy. I understood why. Men deprived of land and standing often discovered that rebellion and banditry could look remarkably similar once enough of them gathered in the same place.
"We question every prisoner separately," I continued. "No one sees another, and we compare their answers before deciding which story deserves belief. I want patterns, not accusations."
The raids stopped entirely on the third day. Oscar initially regarded that as evidence the road closures were working. I found it more concerning.
"They know we are here," I told him that evening while we stood over the map. "They have stopped because moving openly has become dangerous. If we leave and the raids begin again, then all we have accomplished is teaching them to wait."
Blue Bat stood opposite me, studying the marked attacks before speaking in High Valyrian. "Hundreds of men still require food even when they stop raiding. Their horses require more than the men do. If they are not taking supplies now, either they possess stores, or someone is bringing supplies to them."
I translated for Oscar and the Frey castellan. Oscar looked towards the reports. "The missing grain convoys."
The wagons had bothered me from the beginning. Hungry men stole what they could carry. Men planning to remain together stole carts, animals, and stores.
"How long could the grain already taken support them?" I asked.
Oscar considered the recorded amounts. "If there are only three hundred men, they could survive for months. If there are closer to a thousand, then considerably less."
The Frey castellan frowned. "A thousand bandits could not live this close to Harrenhal without someone noticing."
"Someone has noticed," I replied. "Villages are being raided, patrols have disappeared, and wagonloads of grain keep vanishing. We simply continued calling each incident banditry instead of asking what kind of organisation was capable of sustaining it."
The first real break came on the fourth day.
A charcoal burner approached one of the Unsullied checkpoints north of the Stone Hedge road and reported seeing covered carts travelling at night. They carried no lanterns and were guarded by mounted men who paid nearby villagers to remain indoors. He had observed them twice from woodland while tending his kilns, and both times they travelled towards the same abandoned fortified manor south-west of Harrenhal.
Oscar knew the place. "The old Darry road passes less than a mile east of it," he said after the charcoal burner marked the location. "The manor sits behind low hills and has been empty since the early years of the war. Anyone moving along the main road would never see wagons entering."
Blue Bat questioned the man in High Valyrian while his interpreter translated into the Common Tongue, asking about the number of riders, the direction of the carts, visible fires, horses, and whether armed men watched the nearby hills. The charcoal burner believed at least forty riders had escorted the last convoy, with several more positioned farther from the road.
That evening, Blue Bat and I stood above Harrenhal’s gate while Unsullied companies prepared below. "If we march directly towards the manor, anyone watching Harrenhal will warn them," he said.
"Then we make certain the watchers see what we want them to see."
By dawn, four hundred Unsullied marched west towards Stone Hedge while another three hundred travelled north. Oscar sent riders south as though searching the country near the Blackwater. Anyone observing Harrenhal would see the royal force widening its search away from the abandoned manor.
The real column departed through a lesser gate before sunrise the following morning. Eight hundred Unsullied marched with Blue Bat, Oscar, and me, carrying no banners once Harrenhal disappeared behind us.
The men we hunted had spent months behaving boldly because no one possessed enough soldiers, information, or patience to trap them. They had murdered farmers, slaughtered patrols, stolen royal supplies, and grown confident enough to believe the Riverlands would continue enduring whatever they chose to take.
I had once dismissed them as another wound left by the civil war. Now I understood that leaving such wounds untreated merely allowed them to rot.
We would find the men responsible, but killing whatever bandits happened to stand before us would not be enough. We would find whoever fed them, sheltered them, warned them of patrols, purchased what they stole, and gave them enough confidence to believe they could continue.
This time, I intended to remove the problem root and stem.
Chapter 204: The Bracken Bandit
The abandoned manor was not abandoned.
We discovered that before sunrise, when Blue Bat’s scouts returned from the low hills overlooking the old Darry road. From the main track, little could be seen beyond broken stone walls and the collapsed remains of an outer tower.
From higher ground, however, smoke rose through several carefully concealed vents, horses stood beneath canvas awnings stretched between ruined buildings, and sentries moved along positions hidden from anyone approaching directly from the east.
The charcoal burner had been correct.
He had underestimated the scale.
Blue Bat crouched beside me upon the ridge while the first light began touching the countryside. Oscar remained several paces behind us with two of his captains, while Blue Bat’s interpreter waited near him in case the conversation required translation. Between Blue Bat and me, High Valyrian was sufficient.
"There are more than eight hundred inside," Blue Bat said quietly. "Perhaps a thousand if some are sleeping beneath the ruins. We counted almost four hundred horses and several wagon lines along the western wall."
I studied the manor below.
Once, it had probably belonged to some minor landed knight who believed thick walls and a modest tower sufficient protection from the ordinary dangers of the Riverlands. War had disproved that assumption. The roofs were partly collapsed, the gatehouse had burned, and one section of the outer curtain had fallen completely.
The bandits had turned the destruction into an advantage.
They had rebuilt nothing that could be seen from the road. Timber shelters stood behind broken walls, tents had been placed inside roofless halls, and brush concealed several narrow paths leading towards the woodland west of the estate. Grain wagons were parked beneath torn canvas alongside barrels, livestock, and piles of stolen equipment.
This was not a group of desperate men sleeping wherever night found them. It was a base.
"How many sentries?" I asked.
"Thirty that we have seen. There will be more inside. Most watch the eastern and northern approaches because those are the easiest routes from Harrenhal."
"Then we do not use either."
Blue Bat nodded. "The southern ground is marshy, but men can cross it on foot. Horses cannot move quickly there."
"That makes it useful."
I returned to Oscar and explained what the scouts had found. His expression hardened as soon as I gave him the estimated number. "Nearly a thousand men have been living within riding distance of Harrenhal, and no one discovered this?"
"They chose the position well. Anyone following the main road sees ruins and keeps moving. Villagers who came close were probably threatened, bribed, or killed."
Oscar looked towards the hidden camp. "If this many are gathered here, then the attacks were only sustaining them. They were building something."
"That is what concerns me."
There was no reason to maintain eight hundred or a thousand armed men merely to steal grain from villages. A band of thieves became less profitable as it grew because every additional mouth required another raid. Someone had kept these men together despite that inconvenience.
The question of why could wait until we had survivors capable of answering it.
Blue Bat divided the Unsullied into four formations. Two hundred remained north-east of the manor, visible enough that any sentry looking towards the road would eventually notice movement.
Another hundred and fifty shifted west beneath cover of woodland, tasked with blocking the easiest escape route. Oscar’s riders remained farther back to capture anyone who broke into open country rather than throwing themselves into ruined walls.
The remaining Unsullied moved south with Blue Bat and me. There were no banners. No horns announced us.
We crossed the marshland slowly, boots sinking into dark water and reeds brushing against armour. The ground smelled of mud and rotting vegetation, and more than once I began questioning whether avoiding the obvious approach justified arriving with half the army covered to the knees in filth.
Blue Bat apparently reached the same conclusion. "If this becomes a regular method of war," he said in High Valyrian, "I would prefer an enemy who builds camps on dry hills."
"I will include that preference in future campaign planning."
"You have promised easier campaigns before."
"That sounds unlike me."
His expression suggested otherwise.
We reached solid ground less than three hundred paces from the southern wall. No alarm sounded. The bandits had been bold for too long. That confidence had reduced the number of sentries where the terrain itself appeared sufficient protection.
Blue Bat raised one hand. The Unsullied halted. Ahead of us, two men stood near a breach in the broken wall. One carried a spear while the other sat upon a stone eating from a wooden bowl. Neither wore a uniform. One had a faded red cloak, the other a piece of mail beneath patched leather. Former soldiers.
Blue Bat gave the signal. Four Unsullied moved forward. The sentries died before either could shout. Then we entered the camp.
The first alarm came from somewhere near the old stable. A man saw the line of Unsullied emerging through the southern breach and screamed for weapons. Another overturned a bench while reaching for his sword, and within seconds the quiet camp became confusion.
The Unsullied did not become confused by it. Their first ranks moved into the open yard and formed almost immediately, shields locking while men behind lowered spears over their shoulders. Bandits emerged from tents and ruined chambers in scattered groups, many still fastening armour or carrying weapons without shields.
Several charged anyway. They died against the spear line. The first impact lasted only seconds. Men rushed forward expecting surprise to compensate for disorder, struck disciplined ranks, and discovered that courage did not create formation where none existed.
Blue Bat shouted commands in High Valyrian. The centre advanced. Unsullied shields moved across the yard with mechanical patience, pushing the bandits away from the southern breach and towards the centre of their own camp. Those who attempted to flee east found the visible detachment already advancing from that direction. The trap became apparent.
Someone sounded a horn. That changed the resistance. Men who had initially fought as scattered thieves began forming around several veterans near the old hall. Shields appeared. Spears lowered. Orders were shouted with enough familiarity that I immediately recognised soldiers rather than common robbers.
Half these men had fought before. Perhaps more. A broad man beneath a rust-coloured cloak climbed onto the remains of a wagon and shouted for them to rally beneath the Bracken horse.
For the first time, I saw their banner. It had been hidden until then, rolled beneath a canvas near the hall. Someone raised it hastily above the gathering formation: the red stallion of House Bracken, faded and stained by weather.
Oscar saw it from the northern approach. His riders shouted in anger. The bandit leader raised his sword and called across the camp. "You followed Bracken banners before! Hold now, and we take back everything the trout stole from us!"
So that was the purpose. Not merely robbery. Resentment had given them something around which to organise.
I moved closer behind the Unsullied line and shouted towards him. "Who are you?"
The man looked across the fighting until he located me. "Marq Bracken!"
The name meant little at first, though Oscar would later explain the connection more completely. Marq belonged to the wider Bracken family, a cousin several branches removed from the men who had ruled Stone Hedge before the war. He possessed no legitimate claim recognised by the crown, but legitimacy mattered less to dispossessed soldiers than a familiar name.
Marq lifted his sword. "My family bled for those lands before Tully boys were given them as rewards!"
I had no interest in debating inheritance across a battlefield. "Then you should have presented your grievance before the crown rather than murdering farmers."
"The crown stole our home."
"The ruling Brackens chose rebellion and lost it. The villagers you burned did not make that choice for them."
His expression twisted. "Kill the foreign dogs!"
The bandits advanced. That was their final mistake. They had enough veterans to form a respectable line, but not enough discipline to make one thousand half-trained men behave like an army. Former Bracken soldiers held the centre while newer recruits crowded behind them, pushing forward without understanding how little space remained.
The Unsullied received them. The sound became terrible. Spears struck shields and bodies. Men fell beneath the feet of those behind them. The first Bracken line fought well enough to kill several Unsullied, but each loss in their formation widened while ours closed almost immediately.
Blue Bat directed the second rank around their left. I followed his intention before he spoke. "Do it."
Two hundred Unsullied shifted through the ruined stable yard and struck the Bracken flank. Their formation collapsed within minutes. After that, it stopped being a battle. Some bandits threw down weapons. Others ran.
Many of the veterans continued fighting because they understood what capture might mean after months of murder and raiding. They gathered around the old hall and attempted to create another defensive position among broken walls.
The Unsullied cleared it methodically. No dramatic charges were required. Shields advanced through doorways. Spears forced men from cover. Anyone who surrendered was pulled aside and bound; anyone who continued fighting was killed.
The western blocking force caught hundreds attempting to escape into the woods. Oscar’s riders intercepted others who reached open fields. By midday, the camp belonged to us. Nearly three quarters of the bandit force were dead or captured.
The dead lay thickest around the old hall and stable yard, where Marq’s veterans had attempted to hold. Somewhere close to four hundred men had been killed during the fighting. Another three hundred surrendered or were captured while fleeing. A smaller number escaped through woodland before the western detachment completely closed the paths.
Our losses were far lighter, though not insignificant. Twenty-eight Unsullied were dead. More than seventy had wounds requiring treatment. Oscar lost four riders pursuing men who broke north.
Blue Bat walked the field after the fighting ended, speaking with his officers and examining the positions where the bandits had resisted hardest. His interpreter followed whenever Riverland men joined the conversation, though when Blue Bat returned to me he spoke directly in High Valyrian.
"Many of the men near the hall were soldiers."
"I noticed."
"We found old Bracken shields beneath the canvas shelters. Some still carry equipment marked with their former lord’s sigil."
Oscar approached before I answered. Blue Bat repeated the substance through his interpreter.
The young Lord Paramount looked across the prisoners seated beneath Unsullied guard. "My men recognise some of them. They served the Brackens during the war and disappeared after Stone Hedge changed hands. We assumed most had gone west or returned to their villages."
"Instead they came here," I said.
Oscar nodded grimly. "Marq gave them somewhere to gather."
The prisoners confirmed it during the afternoon. Almost half the bandit force consisted of former Bracken men-at-arms, household soldiers, retainers, and camp followers who disappeared as the civil war turned against their lords.
Some had gone into hiding before Stone Hedge formally passed to Oscar, convinced that surrender would lead to imprisonment or execution. Marq Bracken found them slowly, promising that the Tully settlement would not last and that the old lands could eventually be reclaimed.
The other half were less political. Deserters. Criminals. Dispossessed farmers. Men who discovered Marq offered food and stolen coin in exchange for carrying a weapon.
The raids had supplied the camp while weakening Oscar’s authority. Marq intended to let resentment spread until he possessed enough men to challenge isolated Tully garrisons directly. He had been creating a rebellion without calling it one.
There was only one problem with ending it. Marq Bracken was missing. I learned that shortly before sunset when Blue Bat entered the old manor hall where Oscar and I were reviewing prisoner lists.
He spoke before reaching the table. "We did not find him."
I looked up. "Among the dead?"
Blue Bat shook his head. "We checked every body matching his description. He is not among the prisoners either."
Oscar waited until the interpreter repeated the exchange before swearing quietly. "He was in the centre when the fighting began. I saw him near the Bracken banner."
"So did I."
A Tully rider placed a captured cloak upon the table. Rust-coloured. Marq’s. "He abandoned this near the western wall," He explained. "One prisoner claims Marq ordered the veterans to hold the hall while he went to bring men from the western camp. There was no western camp."
Oscar stared at the cloak. "He ran."
I had watched Marq raise his sword and tell other men that House Bracken’s honour required them to fight. Then he left them to die. That was a familiar kind of courage.
"How did he get through the western cordon?" I asked.
"Before it completely closed. Three horses are missing from a hidden shelter beyond the manor wall. The tracks travel south-west before separating near a stream. He probably had two men with him."
Oscar’s jaw tightened. "If he reaches former Bracken villages, someone may hide him."
"Someone almost certainly will."
The victory suddenly felt unfinished. We had destroyed Marq’s force. Three quarters were dead or prisoners, their stores captured, their base exposed, and whatever plan they possessed for retaking Stone Hedge ended before it became a true rebellion.
Yet the man who built it remained free. Marq Bracken carried a name capable of gathering remnants around him again. He knew the villages that had sheltered his followers, the people who provided information, and whatever networks allowed nearly a thousand men to survive beneath Harrenhal’s shadow.
More importantly, he had already demonstrated that he was willing to send others into battle while preserving himself. A courageous rebel might accept defeat. A craven one often survived long enough to become troublesome twice.
I looked towards Blue Bat. "How long before the men can move?"
"The uninjured can begin tonight. I would give the rest until morning."
"We do not need all of them. Send two hundred south-west immediately and another hundred towards the Stone Hedge road. No large formations this time. Marq knows what an army looks like and will avoid one."
Oscar leaned over the map. "I can send riders to every village his family once controlled."
"Send messages, not accusations. If we begin arresting anyone who once served a Bracken, we will manufacture sympathy for him faster than he could."
Oscar nodded.
Blue Bat looked towards me. "And the roads?"
"Keep them closed."
Marq had abandoned his men because he believed hiding would save him. Perhaps it would for a few days. Maybe even weeks. It would not save him permanently.
We had cut away the army he spent months building. Now the surviving prisoners would tell us who supplied him, which villages sheltered messengers, where coin had come from, and which roads he preferred when he wanted to travel unseen.
Marq Bracken had proven himself brave enough to order other men to die. Now I intended to discover how brave he remained when there was no army left between him and the consequences.
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