Rewriting Targaryen History

Chapter 204: The Bracken Bandit

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The abandoned manor was not abandoned.

We discovered that before sunrise, when Blue Bat’s scouts returned from the low hills overlooking the old Darry road. From the main track, little could be seen beyond broken stone walls and the collapsed remains of an outer tower.

From higher ground, however, smoke rose through several carefully concealed vents, horses stood beneath canvas awnings stretched between ruined buildings, and sentries moved along positions hidden from anyone approaching directly from the east.

The charcoal burner had been correct.

He had underestimated the scale.

Blue Bat crouched beside me upon the ridge while the first light began touching the countryside. Oscar remained several paces behind us with two of his captains, while Blue Bat’s interpreter waited near him in case the conversation required translation. Between Blue Bat and me, High Valyrian was sufficient.

"There are more than eight hundred inside," Blue Bat said quietly. "Perhaps a thousand if some are sleeping beneath the ruins. We counted almost four hundred horses and several wagon lines along the western wall."

I studied the manor below.

Once, it had probably belonged to some minor landed knight who believed thick walls and a modest tower sufficient protection from the ordinary dangers of the Riverlands. War had disproved that assumption. The roofs were partly collapsed, the gatehouse had burned, and one section of the outer curtain had fallen completely.

The bandits had turned the destruction into an advantage.

They had rebuilt nothing that could be seen from the road. Timber shelters stood behind broken walls, tents had been placed inside roofless halls, and brush concealed several narrow paths leading towards the woodland west of the estate. Grain wagons were parked beneath torn canvas alongside barrels, livestock, and piles of stolen equipment.

This was not a group of desperate men sleeping wherever night found them. It was a base.

"How many sentries?" I asked.

"Thirty that we have seen. There will be more inside. Most watch the eastern and northern approaches because those are the easiest routes from Harrenhal."

"Then we do not use either."

Blue Bat nodded. "The southern ground is marshy, but men can cross it on foot. Horses cannot move quickly there."

"That makes it useful."

I returned to Oscar and explained what the scouts had found. His expression hardened as soon as I gave him the estimated number. "Nearly a thousand men have been living within riding distance of Harrenhal, and no one discovered this?"

"They chose the position well. Anyone following the main road sees ruins and keeps moving. Villagers who came close were probably threatened, bribed, or killed."

Oscar looked towards the hidden camp. "If this many are gathered here, then the attacks were only sustaining them. They were building something."

"That is what concerns me."

There was no reason to maintain eight hundred or a thousand armed men merely to steal grain from villages. A band of thieves became less profitable as it grew because every additional mouth required another raid. Someone had kept these men together despite that inconvenience.

The question of why could wait until we had survivors capable of answering it.

Blue Bat divided the Unsullied into four formations. Two hundred remained north-east of the manor, visible enough that any sentry looking towards the road would eventually notice movement.

Another hundred and fifty shifted west beneath cover of woodland, tasked with blocking the easiest escape route. Oscar’s riders remained farther back to capture anyone who broke into open country rather than throwing themselves into ruined walls.

The remaining Unsullied moved south with Blue Bat and me. There were no banners. No horns announced us.

We crossed the marshland slowly, boots sinking into dark water and reeds brushing against armour. The ground smelled of mud and rotting vegetation, and more than once I began questioning whether avoiding the obvious approach justified arriving with half the army covered to the knees in filth.

Blue Bat apparently reached the same conclusion. "If this becomes a regular method of war," he said in High Valyrian, "I would prefer an enemy who builds camps on dry hills."

"I will include that preference in future campaign planning."

"You have promised easier campaigns before."

"That sounds unlike me."

His expression suggested otherwise.

We reached solid ground less than three hundred paces from the southern wall. No alarm sounded. The bandits had been bold for too long. That confidence had reduced the number of sentries where the terrain itself appeared sufficient protection.

Blue Bat raised one hand. The Unsullied halted. Ahead of us, two men stood near a breach in the broken wall. One carried a spear while the other sat upon a stone eating from a wooden bowl. Neither wore a uniform. One had a faded red cloak, the other a piece of mail beneath patched leather. Former soldiers.

Blue Bat gave the signal. Four Unsullied moved forward. The sentries died before either could shout. Then we entered the camp.

The first alarm came from somewhere near the old stable. A man saw the line of Unsullied emerging through the southern breach and screamed for weapons. Another overturned a bench while reaching for his sword, and within seconds the quiet camp became confusion.

The Unsullied did not become confused by it. Their first ranks moved into the open yard and formed almost immediately, shields locking while men behind lowered spears over their shoulders. Bandits emerged from tents and ruined chambers in scattered groups, many still fastening armour or carrying weapons without shields.

Several charged anyway. They died against the spear line. The first impact lasted only seconds. Men rushed forward expecting surprise to compensate for disorder, struck disciplined ranks, and discovered that courage did not create formation where none existed.

Blue Bat shouted commands in High Valyrian. The centre advanced. Unsullied shields moved across the yard with mechanical patience, pushing the bandits away from the southern breach and towards the centre of their own camp. Those who attempted to flee east found the visible detachment already advancing from that direction. The trap became apparent.

Someone sounded a horn. That changed the resistance. Men who had initially fought as scattered thieves began forming around several veterans near the old hall. Shields appeared. Spears lowered. Orders were shouted with enough familiarity that I immediately recognised soldiers rather than common robbers.

Half these men had fought before. Perhaps more. A broad man beneath a rust-coloured cloak climbed onto the remains of a wagon and shouted for them to rally beneath the Bracken horse.

For the first time, I saw their banner. It had been hidden until then, rolled beneath a canvas near the hall. Someone raised it hastily above the gathering formation: the red stallion of House Bracken, faded and stained by weather.

Oscar saw it from the northern approach. His riders shouted in anger. The bandit leader raised his sword and called across the camp. "You followed Bracken banners before! Hold now, and we take back everything the trout stole from us!"

So that was the purpose. Not merely robbery. Resentment had given them something around which to organise.

I moved closer behind the Unsullied line and shouted towards him. "Who are you?"

The man looked across the fighting until he located me. "Marq Bracken!"

The name meant little at first, though Oscar would later explain the connection more completely. Marq belonged to the wider Bracken family, a cousin several branches removed from the men who had ruled Stone Hedge before the war. He possessed no legitimate claim recognised by the crown, but legitimacy mattered less to dispossessed soldiers than a familiar name.

Marq lifted his sword. "My family bled for those lands before Tully boys were given them as rewards!"

I had no interest in debating inheritance across a battlefield. "Then you should have presented your grievance before the crown rather than murdering farmers."

"The crown stole our home."

"The ruling Brackens chose rebellion and lost it. The villagers you burned did not make that choice for them."

His expression twisted. "Kill the foreign dogs!"

The bandits advanced. That was their final mistake. They had enough veterans to form a respectable line, but not enough discipline to make one thousand half-trained men behave like an army. Former Bracken soldiers held the centre while newer recruits crowded behind them, pushing forward without understanding how little space remained.

The Unsullied received them. The sound became terrible. Spears struck shields and bodies. Men fell beneath the feet of those behind them. The first Bracken line fought well enough to kill several Unsullied, but each loss in their formation widened while ours closed almost immediately.

Blue Bat directed the second rank around their left. I followed his intention before he spoke. "Do it."

Two hundred Unsullied shifted through the ruined stable yard and struck the Bracken flank. Their formation collapsed within minutes. After that, it stopped being a battle. Some bandits threw down weapons. Others ran.

Many of the veterans continued fighting because they understood what capture might mean after months of murder and raiding. They gathered around the old hall and attempted to create another defensive position among broken walls.

The Unsullied cleared it methodically. No dramatic charges were required. Shields advanced through doorways. Spears forced men from cover. Anyone who surrendered was pulled aside and bound; anyone who continued fighting was killed.

The western blocking force caught hundreds attempting to escape into the woods. Oscar’s riders intercepted others who reached open fields. By midday, the camp belonged to us. Nearly three quarters of the bandit force were dead or captured.

The dead lay thickest around the old hall and stable yard, where Marq’s veterans had attempted to hold. Somewhere close to four hundred men had been killed during the fighting. Another three hundred surrendered or were captured while fleeing. A smaller number escaped through woodland before the western detachment completely closed the paths.

Our losses were far lighter, though not insignificant. Twenty-eight Unsullied were dead. More than seventy had wounds requiring treatment. Oscar lost four riders pursuing men who broke north.

Blue Bat walked the field after the fighting ended, speaking with his officers and examining the positions where the bandits had resisted hardest. His interpreter followed whenever Riverland men joined the conversation, though when Blue Bat returned to me he spoke directly in High Valyrian.

"Many of the men near the hall were soldiers."

"I noticed."

"We found old Bracken shields beneath the canvas shelters. Some still carry equipment marked with their former lord’s sigil."

Oscar approached before I answered. Blue Bat repeated the statement through his interpreter.

The young Lord Paramount looked across the prisoners seated beneath Unsullied guard. "My men recognise some of them. They served the Brackens during the war and disappeared after Stone Hedge changed hands. We assumed most had gone west or returned to their villages."

"Instead they came here," I said.

Oscar nodded grimly. "Marq gave them somewhere to gather."

The prisoners confirmed it during the afternoon. Almost half the bandit force consisted of former Bracken men-at-arms, household soldiers, retainers, and camp followers who disappeared as the civil war turned against their lords.

Some had gone into hiding before Stone Hedge formally passed to Oscar, convinced that surrender would lead to imprisonment or execution. Marq Bracken found them slowly, promising that the Tully settlement would not last and that the old lands could eventually be reclaimed.

The other half were less political. Deserters. Criminals. Dispossessed farmers. Men who discovered Marq offered food and stolen coin in exchange for carrying a weapon.

The raids had supplied the camp while weakening Oscar’s authority. Marq intended to let resentment spread until he possessed enough men to challenge isolated Tully garrisons directly. He had been creating a rebellion without calling it one.

There was only one problem with ending it. Marq Bracken was missing. I learned that shortly before sunset when Blue Bat entered the old manor hall where Oscar and I were reviewing prisoner lists.

He spoke before reaching the table. "We did not find him."

I looked up. "Among the dead?"

Blue Bat shook his head. "We checked every body matching his description. He is not among the prisoners either."

Oscar waited until the interpreter repeated the exchange before swearing quietly. "He was in the centre when the fighting began. I saw him near the Bracken banner."

"So did I."

A Tully rider placed a captured cloak upon the table. Rust-coloured. Marq’s. "He abandoned this near the western wall," He explained. "One prisoner claims Marq ordered the veterans to hold the hall while he went to bring men from the western camp. There was no western camp."

Oscar stared at the cloak. "He ran."

I had watched Marq raise his sword and tell other men that House Bracken’s honour required them to fight. Then he left them to die. That was a familiar kind of courage.

"How did he get through the western cordon?" I asked.

"Before it completely closed. Three horses are missing from a hidden shelter beyond the manor wall. The tracks travel south-west before separating near a stream. He probably had two men with him."

Oscar’s jaw tightened. "If he reaches former Bracken villages, someone may hide him."

"Someone almost certainly will."

The victory suddenly felt unfinished. We had destroyed Marq’s force. Three quarters were dead or prisoners, their stores captured, their base exposed, and whatever plan they possessed for retaking Stone Hedge ended before it became a true rebellion.

Yet the man who built it remained free. Marq Bracken carried a name capable of gathering remnants around him again. He knew the villages that had sheltered his followers, the people who provided information, and whatever networks allowed nearly a thousand men to survive beneath Harrenhal’s shadow.

More importantly, he had already demonstrated that he was willing to send others into battle while preserving himself. A courageous rebel might accept defeat. A craven one often survived long enough to become troublesome twice.

I looked towards Blue Bat. "How long before the men can move?"

"The uninjured can begin tonight. I would give the rest until morning."

"We do not need all of them. Send two hundred south-west immediately and another hundred towards the Stone Hedge road. No large formations this time. Marq knows what an army looks like and will avoid one."

Oscar leaned over the map. "I can send riders to every village his family once controlled."

"Send messages, not accusations. If we begin arresting anyone who once served a Bracken, we will manufacture sympathy for him faster than he could."

Oscar nodded.

Blue Bat looked towards me. "And the roads?"

"Keep them closed."

Marq had abandoned his men because he believed hiding would save him. Perhaps it would for a few days. Maybe even weeks. It would not save him permanently.

We had cut away the army he spent months building. Now the surviving prisoners would tell us who supplied him, which villages sheltered messengers, where coin had come from, and which roads he preferred when he wanted to travel unseen.

Marq Bracken had proven himself brave enough to order other men to die. Now I intended to discover how brave he remained when there was no army left between him and the consequences.

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