Rewriting Targaryen History
Chapter 205: The Craven Bracken
Marq Bracken had three horses, two companions, and perhaps half a day before we began hunting him properly. It was not enough.
The destruction of his camp had broken the largest concentration of bandits between Harrenhal and Stone Hedge, but allowing Marq himself to disappear into the countryside would have turned a victory into an unfinished problem.
He possessed a Bracken name, knew which villages still resented Oscar Tully, and had already proven capable of gathering former soldiers who believed the war had ended badly rather than simply ended. If given several months, he might not rebuild a thousand men, but he could certainly gather fifty. Fifty became a hundred once farmers started believing the crown had forgotten them again.
I had no intention of repeating the same campaign next year because we became satisfied after destroying the obvious target.
Blue Bat sent patrols south and west before darkness fully settled. The Unsullied moved in groups small enough to cover ground quickly but large enough that Marq could not simply ambush one and take fresh horses.
Oscar dispatched riders towards Stone Hedge, while Frey men watched the roads around Harrenhal. Every ferry, bridge, and recognised crossing received a description of Marq before midnight.
His rust-coloured cloak had been abandoned at the manor, which removed the easiest way to identify him, but his face was known well enough among former Bracken lands.
The more useful information came from prisoners. Men became considerably more willing to explain loyalties once the leader who promised to restore their fortunes had abandoned them.
By the following morning, we knew Marq had maintained several safe houses between Stone Hedge and the Gods Eye. Some belonged to former Bracken retainers. Others were ordinary farmsteads where coin or fear had purchased silence. Two prisoners independently named a mill south of the old Darry road. Another mentioned a widow whose sons had served under the Bracken banner during the war.
None knew where Marq intended to go if his camp fell. That was because Marq had apparently never told them his escape plan.
Blue Bat found that revealing. "He expected everyone else to hold long enough for him to escape," he said in High Valyrian while we rode along the southern road. "A man who prepares hidden horses but does not tell his officers where he intends to regroup is not planning to continue command immediately."
"He was planning to survive."
"Yes. Men who intend to rally followers arrange somewhere for those followers to find them. Marq arranged somewhere for himself to run."
The distinction suited everything we had learned about him. Marq spoke about honour, inheritance, and the theft of Bracken lands while living from grain stolen from the same people he claimed should support him. He ordered veteran soldiers to hold the manor while he slipped through a western path before the encirclement closed. There had been no second camp, no reserve force, and no prepared rallying point.
He wanted others to believe he represented unfinished rebellion. In the end, he represented himself.
Oscar rode on my other side, unable to follow the High Valyrian exchange. I summarised Blue Bat’s conclusion for him. "That means he may avoid the obvious Bracken sympathisers," Oscar said. "If he believes the cause is finished, he may be trying to reach the Westerlands."
"Possibly, although travelling west requires crossing roads we now control. If he reaches the hills, he becomes harder to find, but he still needs food and fresh horses."
Oscar considered the countryside ahead of us. "Then we should warn every village that anyone helping him will be punished."
"No. We tell them that knowingly sheltering Marq is a crime, but we also make it clear that anyone forced to aid him will not be treated as an accomplice. If he is desperate enough, he will stop asking permission."
That proved important before the day ended.
The first abandoned horse was discovered beside a stream shortly after noon. It had gone lame in the left foreleg and been released rather than killed. The saddle remained, but the bags were gone.
Blue Bat examined the animal before walking along the muddy bank. "They separated here."
The tracks were confused by water, but not enough to conceal everything. Two horses travelled west after crossing the stream, while another set turned south.
"Marq?" Oscar asked.
Blue Bat answered me in High Valyrian, and I translated. "He thinks the western tracks are deliberately obvious. Two horses together, no attempt to hide their direction, and they remained on soft ground long enough to leave clear prints. The southern rider entered the stream for a time before leaving over stones."
Oscar stared west. "His companions are drawing us away."
"That would be my assumption."
We split the search. Oscar took Tully riders west with one hundred Unsullied, not because I expected Marq to be there, but because the two companions still mattered. Blue Bat and I continued south with fewer than eighty men. The remainder spread across roads and villages behind us.
By evening, the southern trail became easier. Marq had changed horses. The owner was a farmer named Kennet who lived with his wife and four children near a small stream feeding the Blackwater. He had given Marq a fresh gelding because a sword had been held against his eldest son’s throat. Kennet was terrified when the Unsullied arrived, apparently believing we might punish him for cooperating.
I dismissed that concern immediately. "You were threatened. You are not responsible for what a man forces you to do while holding a blade against your child. Tell us which direction he travelled and whether he said anything useful."
The farmer’s shoulders visibly loosened. "He asked where the old road towards Stone Hedge joined the southern track, my prince. I told him. Then he asked which farms had horses. I gave him three names because I thought if I refused he would hurt the boy."
"You did what kept your family alive."
Kennet swallowed. "He said Lord Tully stole his birthright and that good men would rise again once he reached his people."
Oscar was not with us to hear it. Perhaps that was fortunate. Marq had already abandoned his army, but he had not abandoned the story that justified everything he did. Men like him rarely did. A man could admit that his plan failed more easily than admitting his plan had never been noble. We rode until darkness made tracks unreliable and resumed at first light.
The next two days became a slow narrowing of possibilities. A horse was seen near a mill but disappeared before our patrol arrived. A shepherd reported a lone rider crossing his fields without using the road. A woman at a roadside cottage sold bread to a man matching Marq’s description and remembered that he kept looking north while speaking to her.
We found the gelding taken from Kennet tethered inside an abandoned barn. Marq was on foot. That changed the hunt considerably. A man could move unnoticed more easily without a horse, but he could no longer outrun mounted patrols or travel twenty leagues in a day. His world had become smaller, and every hour we searched made it smaller still.
By the fourth day, Blue Bat believed we had contained him within a rough triangle between two streams and the old Stone Hedge road.
I agreed. We established checkpoints rather than continuing to chase every rumour. Unsullied patrols moved between farms in widening sweeps. No house was searched violently unless there was evidence to justify it. Families were questioned, barns checked, and wells examined for abandoned equipment.
Marq had spent months depending upon fear and local silence. Now every farmer knew nearly a thousand of his men had been killed or captured. Fear was changing direction.
The break came from a boy of perhaps twelve. He approached an Unsullied patrol near midday and tried to explain something in Common Tongue. The soldiers understood little, but they recognised Marq’s name and brought him to Blue Bat’s interpreter.
The boy’s family lived less than three miles away. His uncle, a man named Harys, had not attended market that morning despite promising to do so. More importantly, Harys had sent the boy away the previous afternoon with instructions to stay with relatives until someone came for him. That was unusual enough. The boy had also seen an unfamiliar man watching from an upstairs window.
We moved immediately. The farmhouse stood alone beside a narrow field bordered by willow trees. It was larger than most in the region, with a stone lower floor and timber above. A barn stood thirty paces behind it, while a small vegetable garden separated the house from the road. No one worked outside. No smoke rose from the chimney despite the midday meal approaching.
Blue Bat and I dismounted beyond the final bend where the house could not see the road. He listened while the boy described the layout through the interpreter, then addressed me in High Valyrian.
"There are three doors. The rear door enters near the kitchen, the front opens directly into the main room, and a side entrance leads through a storage room. If Marq watches the road, he will see anyone approaching the front."
"We surround it before speaking to him. No arrows through windows unless we know where the family is."
Blue Bat nodded. "If he has hostages, he will try to use them to buy a horse."
"He has already abandoned nearly a thousand men to save himself. I doubt his courage improves when the blade is against someone else’s throat."
The Unsullied spread silently through the fields. Twenty circled behind the barn. Others moved through the willow line until every route from the farmhouse was covered. Blue Bat remained near me with one spear in hand and his shield carried upon his back. Only when the cordon was complete did we approach.
The door opened before we reached the garden. Marq Bracken stood inside. He had lost the polished appearance he carried at the bandit camp. His beard had grown unevenly, his clothing was stained with mud, and his hair clung against his forehead. A sword rested in his right hand. His left arm was wrapped around a girl. She could not have been more than sixteen. Marq held the blade beneath her jaw.
Behind him, an older man knelt near the hearth with blood running from one side of his face. A second girl, younger than the first, stood beside him with both hands pressed against her mouth. The father and his daughters. There were no hidden supporters. No final band of loyal Bracken soldiers. Marq Bracken had reached the end of his rebellion inside a farmer’s home.
He recognised me immediately. "You come any closer, and she dies."
I stopped outside the doorway. Blue Bat remained a pace behind and to my left. "There are Unsullied around the entire house, Marq. You have nowhere left to go. Release the girl and put down the sword."
His arm tightened around her. "I want a horse and safe passage west."
"You abandoned hundreds of your own men rather than give them safe passage. You are in a poor position to demand it for yourself."
His face twisted. "Those men knew what they were fighting for."
"They believed you were fighting beside them."
"I am a Bracken. My blood matters more than theirs because without me there is nothing to rally around."
The girl began trembling. I kept my attention on Marq. "You finally said something truthful. Your men died because you thought your name made your life more valuable than theirs. That is why there will be no agreement allowing you to disappear and start again somewhere else."
"You will agree if you want her alive."
The father tried to move. Marq immediately shifted the sword tighter against the girl’s throat. "Stay where you are, or I open her neck."
The older man froze. Blue Bat spoke quietly beside me in High Valyrian. "He is watching you rather than the soldiers."
I did not turn towards him. "He expects me to answer."
"Yes."
Marq shouted from the doorway. "Tell your men to bring a horse. I will take the girl until I am beyond your archers, and when I am far enough away, I will release her."
"You have already demonstrated what your promises are worth. No one here believes you would release her once she stopped being useful."
"You do not have a choice."
He was wrong. I only needed him to believe I was still looking for one.
"You are surrounded, wounded, and exhausted," I said. "If you kill that girl, whatever possibility remains of facing judgement rather than dying here disappears with her. Put down the sword, release the family, and you will be taken to Harrenhal alive."
Marq laughed without humour. "So Oscar Tully can parade me before his people and cut off my head?"
"You will answer for what you have done before the crown and the Riverlands. I will not promise what sentence follows because you have earned no such promise from me."
His eyes moved briefly towards the field. That was all Blue Bat needed. I saw the spear leave his hand only after it was already moving. There was no warning and no shouted command. The weapon crossed the distance between us and struck Marq through the side of his head.
He died before he understood what had happened. His sword dropped from his hand as his body collapsed backwards into the farmhouse. The girl stumbled forward, screaming, and I caught her before she fell from the doorway.
Unsullied entered immediately. The younger daughter ran towards her father while two soldiers checked the remaining rooms. No other bandits were found. Blue Bat stepped across the threshold and retrieved his spear. The interpreter stared at him.
Blue Bat looked towards me and spoke in High Valyrian. "He moved his eyes away from you."
"I noticed slightly later than you did."
"He was going to look for another escape."
"Your solution was effective."
Blue Bat examined the bloodied spearhead. "He threatened the girl. I did not believe he deserved more time to consider it."
Neither did I.
Marq Bracken’s body returned to Harrenhal beneath a plain covering. I refused Oscar’s suggestion that it be displayed publicly. The Riverlands did not need another corpse hanging above a gate. Enough people had seen what happened to men who followed Marq, and the prisoners would spread the story more effectively than a rotting head ever could.
His death mattered because it ended the possibility of another rally around his name.
Over the following weeks, the remaining bandit groups began disappearing almost as quickly as they had formed. Some surrendered after learning Marq was dead. Others broke into smaller gangs and fled away from former Bracken lands, where local patrols could deal with them without royal intervention. Prisoners led us to supply caches, hidden weapons, informants, and several men who had purchased stolen goods.
Not everyone received the same punishment.
Former soldiers who had joined Marq but committed no proven murder could expect imprisonment, fines, forced labour, or service depending upon their crimes. Men responsible for massacring villagers and executing captured patrols would face harsher judgement. There was no reason to create fifty martyrs where ten criminals were enough.
Oscar understood. More importantly, he now knew where resentment remained strongest within his new lands. Stone Hedge could not be governed forever as a prize taken from the Brackens. Its people needed to believe Oscar intended to rule them rather than punish them for the banners their former lords had chosen.
Marq had attempted to build rebellion from men who believed peace left no place for them. His death did not remove that lesson. It merely removed the man trying to turn it into another war.
The roads between Harrenhal and Stone Hedge reopened gradually. Merchants returned. Patrols travelled without disappearing. Villages stopped posting armed men at every entrance after sunset.
The bandits would not vanish in a single week. The Riverlands were too large, and the war had left too many armed men without homes for that. But the organised force behind them was finished. Marq Bracken had run from the battle he created, abandoned the men who trusted him, and spent his final hours hiding behind a farmer’s daughter.
In the end, the rebellion he imagined died as cravenly as the man who began it.
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